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Thursday 6 April 2017

Narrative writing

Narrative Writing Plan
Dimensional time traveling

Once upon a time not so long after the dinosaurs extinct there lived a lovely little girl named rose.she was 1.5 feet tall had navy blue eyes and had lovely long red hair.she lived with here charming father that had a hobby of creating new extraordinary things like the first flying object in all of history of mankind.Her mother died when giving birth to little rose .But her father told her that it was her mother's time to leave them and Rest.


Rose is an extremely kind girl with an amazing personality she didn't care about anything excepted everything around her.she loved going outside to have a couple minutes walking around experiencing something new.But we'll see was just about to go back inside her cottage from experiencing the amazing around her she saw a lovely red rose.so she went along to pick it and as she was picking it she slipped and rolled down the warming grass with happiness.but as she was speeding down the hill she experienced something that couldn't have been possible something Peculiar around her that wasn't really natural but was it happening?


She felt strange as if she was still sliding. she wasn't stopping she saw things around her as if she was time travelling as she stopped everything around her was freezing ice cold and she was freezing like a Popsicle. She was feeling frightened and alone she didn't know what to do as if she was the only living thing there.
But she was wrong. There were flying people small people big people and even people blasting laser beams out of there gauntlets. She had just traveled into a dimension of total psychopaths but really see just traveled into time where people could manipulate objects to make powerful gauntlets that CAN CONTAIN THE POWER OF ANY SORCE AROUND HIM TO CREATE INESCAPABLE DEATH.
Also known as she traveled to a dimension of total braininess.

She didn't know what to do until she came across a frozen snowy stair set that she came across. So she gently started to walk up the stairs to find something far beyond your imagination that couldn't be explained by anything thing you can think of.


TO BE CONTINUED

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