Hi Tapuvae it's me Liam I just wanted to give you some feed back on your b log post. I really like how you had presented your work and how you put all of your facts about Sophie Pascoe in there too.
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Hi Tapuvae it's me Liam I just wanted to give you some feed back on your b log post. I really like how you had presented your work and how you put all of your facts about Sophie Pascoe in there too.
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