Kia,Ora Tapuvae i really like your layout of the story it is very fascinating and your colours are very vibrant to your layout,I enjoyed reading this post or information because you have used excellent Vocabulary and interesting adjectives Next time try to put more photos to recap your work because it would have looked a little bit better but apart from that keep up the excellent work.
Whats up Taps. My name is Jordan. You already know that. I like your first slide because it brings out the demon that we celebrate on Halloween night. You really taught me something because I thought when you say Trick Or Treat they will give you a trick or a treat. I was wrong because either you have a trick or they have a treat.
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Kia,Ora Tapuvae i really like your layout of the story it is very fascinating and your colours are very vibrant to your layout,I enjoyed reading this post or information because you have used excellent Vocabulary and interesting adjectives Next time try to put more photos to recap your work because it would have looked a little bit better but apart from that keep up the excellent work.
ReplyDeleteWhats up Taps. My name is Jordan. You already know that. I like your first slide because it brings out the demon that we celebrate on Halloween night. You really taught me something because I thought when you say Trick Or Treat they will give you a trick or a treat. I was wrong because either you have a trick or they have a treat.
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